Editorial Services for Novelists
Focused feedback on pacing, character, and clarity — so your story reads clean, fast, and engaging.
Good developmental editing isn’t about rewriting your story. It’s about helping you see what’s already there — where the narrative moves, where it stalls, and where the writing is getting in its own way. I work with novelists to identify what’s working, what needs attention, and exactly what to do about it.
What I Offer
Manuscript Evaluation
A comprehensive written assessment of your novel’s structure, pacing, character arcs, and clarity. You’ll receive a detailed editorial letter with specific, actionable suggestions for revision — no line edits. Ideal for writers who want a clear diagnostic before diving into a full revision.
Developmental Edit
A full read with inline notes throughout your manuscript, plus a detailed editorial letter. Focused on story structure, pacing, character motivation, dialogue, and narrative clarity. Ideal for writers who want both the big picture and scene-level guidance.
About My Work
I’ve provided developmental feedback on contracted novels for Erin Healy, a developmental editor whose clients publish with major fiction imprints — with a focus on story structure and character work. I’ve also worked independently with fiction writers across a range of projects, in both manuscript evaluation and full developmental editing.
I’d love to hear about your project. Reach out through the contact form below and tell me where you are in the process — I’ll get back to you within a few days.
